Ro Ro kar uski yaad mei sona acha lagta hai….

15 06 2007

Us ke bina ab chup chap sa rehna acha lagta hai,
Khamoshi sey dard ko sehna acha lagta hai,
Jis hasti ki yaad mein Aanso barstey hain,
Samne us ke kuch naa kehna acha lagta hai,
Mil kar us se Bichar naa jaaon darta rehta hon,
is liye bas door hi rehna acha lagta hai,
janta hoon ke chahat mein bas Aanso milte hain,
Kuch bhi ho ab is zehar ko peena acha lagta hai,
Je chahey sab khushiyan laa kar uss ko de doon,
us ke pyaar mein sab kuch khona acha lagta hai,
us ka milna naa milna Qismat ki baat hai,
Pal Pal us ki yaad mein rona acha lagta hai,
us ke bina sab khushiyan Ajab si lagti hain,
Ro Ro kar us ki yaad mein sona acha lagta hai

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  • Date : June 15, 2007
  • Categories : Ghazals

2 responses

1 07 2008
Jitender Sahni (20:49:35) :

Dear sir,

May I suggest you something if u dont mind?

This shayari is wonderful, I would say awesome. However, Could you please just change that word from sona to khona, sona is really refering to people who are fond of sleeping. In your shayari, ur expresing feelings, feelings should not turn in to laziness. Khona is more likely a wise thing to use. Khona=Lost, Sona=sleep?
Ok thnxx for understanding,
Jitender Sahni

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28 09 2008
Bari (15:31:56) :

i really liked it all

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